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I remember the day it all began clearly. It was a monday afternoon on the first day of a new school term. I had a free period so I did what I always did; sat in the corner of the common room with my two friends, eyeing up all of the hot girls that would walk by. All of us knew it was wrong, but we also said it was kind of a compliment to them because it showed we thought they were pretty.

However, on this day my friends weren't there, both still on family holidays from the preceding week off school. I was gonna have to go it alone, for today at least.

I tried to be subtle seeing as I wasn't surrounded by my friends. So I peeked over one of my magazines hoping that they wouldn't notice me staring at them and their beautiful breasts. I remained unnoticed as many girls passed by, it was all going well.

Then someone walked in that i'll never forget. She must have been new here because I'd never seen her before. She was incredible. Swaying, long, brown hair; perfect sized ass; slim, hourglass figure; beautiful face and amazing, large breasts. She was the greatest looking girl I had ever seen in my life.

Somehow everyone seemed to carry on as normal but I couldn't stop gazing at her. She looked over in my direction, her expression seeming to become quite annoyed for some reason. Then I realised that her looks had made me completely forget about being subtle. It was really obvious where I was looking and what I was gaping at.

She strided over to me, her long hair moving amazingly with every step.

"Just what were you just doing?" she asked me, a tone of anger in her voice.

"I don't know what you're talking about," I responded.

"All of you boys are the same aren't you? You don't care about anything but our looks."

"Take it as a compliment. I wouldn't be staring at you if you were ugly would I?"

"Just prove my point why don't you. I bet you probably think I'm some sort of stupid bimbo as well just because of the way I look."

"Look I'm sorry ok.," I said, about to get up from my seat.

"No. All of the girls here told me about you as soon as I arrived here. It's not just me who thinks you're an ass. Well now you're gonna find out what it feels like to be oogled and stared at all day long by morons like yourself. You've messed with the wrong person"

"Well good luck with that," I responded sarcastically.

With that I decided to get up and leave. But something was wrong. It was as if I was stuck to my chair, unable to move. No one else in the room was moving. Just this girl.

Somehow she began to float in the air, a bright pink aura surrounding her body almost blinding me. She was talking to herself. I could just hear her but was unable to understand a word she was saying.

Suddenly, she clapped her hands. The pink glow fired itself towards me and I couldn't do anything about it. With great pain it hit my body, almost forcing its way into my body through my skin.

I watched as a pink glow coursed through my veins and arteries, spreading through my body. Enormous pain followed. The top of my skull felt as though it was being pulled. My hair began to flow gracefully down to my back. As it passed over my face something was off. My hair, formally black, was now bright blonde and soft.

My skull began to crack and reshape itself into a much softer shape. All of my features shrank down to a much more delicate size as my eyelashes grew longer and my lips puffed out to become much more kissable.

All of my body hair tore itself from my skin, leaving it smooth and soft. My neck narrowed along with my shoulders. My arm lost their muscle to become much thinner than before. I felt my hands get smaller and smaller as they became more petite. My finger nails, however, grew much longer.

My hips flared outwards, growing wider to give me sexy curves. My core hardened as the fat that was there moved to my butt to filled it out, giving me the butt I lusted after all of my years.

Then an enormous surge of pain struck my groin area as my penis shrank into my body leaving me with a slit and my new ovaries.

"Now for my favourite part," exclaimed the girl, still floating as the rest of the school remained frozen.

All I could feel was a tingling sensation in my chest. Slowly, the area around my nipples began to push outwards, as the fat built up behind them. I could only stare in disbelief at what was happening; watching as what I knew were breasts grew larger and larger. They went past A and B, slowing down at C cups. Eventually the girl had mercy, stopping them at just high C-cups.

"Now for the finishing touches," she stated. Another aura built up around her, only this time it was white. With a second clap, the light shot at me again.

My clothes were torn off my body, simply disintergrating into nothing. I could finally see my new body in its full form, freaking me out even more than I had been. Then, I started to feel things pressing up against my skin.

A white set of satin underwear was developing upon my female form. Cupping my sensitive breasts and vagina comfortably. I felt my hair being pulled again, but this time it wasn't painful at all. A red ribbon tied my luscious, blonde locks into a sweet ponytail, still leaving long strands and a fringe infront of my face. A black miniskirt formed around my waist, along with a loose belt that seemed to hang down freely. Finally, a pink tank top slid onto my body, pulling against it tightly to show off my amazing figure.

"One last thing," said the girl, making her way back to the floor. She clicked her fingers, making a small necklace appear. She walked over to me to place it around my neck.

My mind was flooded with new memories, forcing my former self out of my head until it was completely gone.


"Shauna. Shauna, wake up." whsipered the girl, gently shaking me.

"Huh? Like, what happened?"

"I don't know, I just found you like this"

"Well thanks for helping me, babe. I gotta get to my next class. God I wish I was smart like you, life would be, like, so much easier and I would get seen for who I am rather than what I look like."

"Don't worry, Shauna. No-one thinks like that."
A request from :iconsexytgtits:

I think they wanted it to be a series but I don't really work that way so I hope this is just as good. I tried to get the bimbo element in there as much as possible I promise.

No picture was asked for so I thought I'd try something a bit different and use an anime picture, hope you guys like it.

Still not sure about the series idea that I had though, at the moment I think I'm just gonna do short stories.

Not my pic, it's this guys: [link]
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sallyane Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2015
fab cap love this one 2nd read if only
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sallyane Featured By Owner May 22, 2015
brilliant love this cap well done wow if only
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beetlelion12 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014
Wish I had the new girl as my girlfriend (basically like ever other tged girl)
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:icondeathbustereudial103:
Um, hypocrisy on Aisle 5!

Turning a guy into a girl doesn't help anything.
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shaktikannon Featured By Owner May 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Turning a guy into a girl does help because boy would understand girl and would respct her
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deathbustereudial103 Featured By Owner May 9, 2015
Not if his mind is utterly erased it won't.
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shaktikannon Featured By Owner May 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
indeed
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:icondeathbustereudial103:
See?
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Bilztwing Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
You steal the art from here [link]

Isn it against the rule to steal art?
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Pokemon381 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
if she erse the memory than he/she won't know it's a Punishment and it's strange i can read this whitoute losing interest but I can't read books at school
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Macbravo Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That blonde anime attractive girls always makes me in a good mood.
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DzrkArts Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You make it sound like changing genders is painful. :D
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Pokemon381 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
Gabe Newell: hopefully it will be worth the weight
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KingWillhamII Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012
Hahaha. funny, good work!
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xy2kura Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
I all ready explained in my comments that you can't credit an image either and that you needed written permission from the original artist and show proof of that in your comments. Linking to the picture like that is doing "crediting" which again, isn't allowed. Please remove it.

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potsticker13 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
Girls can be pervs too.
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Doodletones Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I want to meet this girl, maybe she can help me with a few things
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shaktikannon Featured By Owner May 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
i want same
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Sunnycat17 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
ALL guys are perverts.
There's even a reason why...
But why hasn't anybody noticed that all of humanity is perverted?

This story was really interesting, my brain was hurting near the end. xD
In a good way. >w>
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shaktikannon Featured By Owner May 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
all guys are pervert because they are men
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thisisboring43 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
For those wondering about the ending, I do realise it makes more sense to learn a lesson by keeping his old memories but the person requesting asked for the character to become a bimbo, hence why it ended this way.
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xy2kura Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
Hmm okay story but I agree with others, a real lesson would be learned if he kept his memories on top of the new ones. Then he would really learn something.

Secondly, I know I'm going to sound a bit of a party pooper to most but as much as you meant well for wanting a picture. You can't use something that isn't yours and even considering credit isn't allowed. Written permission from the original artist is needed along with posting such proof in comments for using things that don't belong to you. Thus, I kindly suggest you take this one down.
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shaktikannon Featured By Owner May 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
maybe sorcerress want he think a thrue woman for live like girl  and then get him this memory in order to he understand
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SonAmyMovie Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012
Wow, interesting story. Though, really, I would have liked it if the guy kept his memories even as a girl, that way he would have learned something. Also, I would have like to have read more.

Nevertheless, this is quite a good satire of how guys are all a bunch of perverts, and girls just can't stand getting checked out all the time. Being a guy, I too have mindless attraction for women; but ever since I found out that it was wrong and unjust, I've been trying to keep it bottled up in that dark, creepy corner of my brain.

If anything, women should be treating men like sexual objects, as men are the true bimbos on this planet. (Well, that or we should just be equal.)
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shaktikannon Featured By Owner May 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
women say man obey it 'll great
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SonAmyMovie Featured By Owner May 11, 2015
Actually, I think I'll take back what I said about women dominating men. I realised at some point since the original comment, that misandry is also wrong, even (or especially?) for a man. Now, I just want everyone to be themselves and fulfil their hopes and dreams, regardless of societal expectations. I'm deeply sorry for what I said earlier. :(
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SonAmyMovie Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012
Also, I think the guy looks so cute in his female form.

(Yes, I know I'm such a hypocrite for saying that after I went on and on about guys being pervs, but I just had to admit it!)
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SimplyAreios Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Average writing skills, but I still enjoyed it. However, I don't think he can learn anything with no memories - wouldn't it make more sense if he could remember, therefor actually understanding?
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Firey-Fox Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Student Writer
i love this story. if only that really happened. the guys at my school sure would treat us better!!
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shaktikannon Featured By Owner Edited May 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
if only that really happened i wouldnot treat you better like that i would be transform into girl it'll be great



but it's right if a boy disrespect girl they would have to into girl
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Evilkritter Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012
Welp, I am gonna rain on this parade a little. It was decent, and I am pleased to see one of these that didn't end with the main character getting raped. It is a "femvenge" piece, the variety that makes no sense to me. He gawked at girls and made sexist remarks, not molested or harassed, so he was punished with a total transformation and complete mental overwrite. How is this fair? How does that make sense? It isn't as if he will learn anything from being transformed, his pervy personality was wiped away along with any trace of who he used to be. I just don't get the appeal of the story.

Why do I bother commenting? Because it showed up in a bunch of trans-gender groups and my girlfriend told me to check it out.
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Acidbl00d Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this was unexpectedly good °_°
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Lehandro Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012
One comment: "comliment" is up there... XD
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ICantGiveCredit Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Da fuq did i just read xD

It sure gave me a laugh!
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Pikpikstarr Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I can't figure out what the fuck I just read
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FoamyFanatic718 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012
That seems a bit of an overreaction on her part.

Okay, more than a bit of an overreaction; more like a complete and total DICK MOVE. Potential for an interesting story, but she just completely fucked with his life for ogling! That's generally considered rude in most cultures. Not excusing the guy being a leery-eyed pervert, but damn if she ain't rude.
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ndunsmo Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012
Oh my god... *points at girl* IT'S IVANKOV'S SLIGHTLY MORE SANE DAUGHTER!!!!! Though honestly, I would like to see a bit of history behind the lead male to give us the impression that he really is an ass. I mean... if all he does is stare at girls, then he doesn't deserve that label.
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RasberryQueen Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Nice story, an original twist too.
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CreatureCola Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I just wanted to ask if you'd be interested in writing a sexy request for me? There was a person who was going to write one for me and I wrote out descriptions on character appearance and it took me a long long time and then they canceled on me.... so I would like to find a serious artist to do it and put my info to good use :3
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thisisboring43 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
I'll see what I can do. Just send a note with what you want.

Probably wont be done straight away but is be happy to look at your idea
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CreatureCola Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ok thanks ^^
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BluePeriwinkle Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012
I'm sorry, but this girl is a bitch.
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RadicalDanny Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012
I never got why some hot girls feel so angry about us guys looking at them, they look at us hot guys all the time too... XD
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MuffinStealer Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Umm. . well, I can tell you that not all girls stare at 'hot' guys all the time. I certainly don't. It's very rude to stare, especially at more private parts of their bodies. (Personally, it makes me feel like they are judging me based on my looks, when I get enough of that from people who judge even in a non-sexual way)

Whenever I get stared at, I have the biggest urge to punch the person in the nose. Or take a bat to their gems, so they tone down their perverted urges a little. (It's really creepy to see some guy staring at your breasts and your ass, even if they are covered up and not being showed off)
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RadicalDanny Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
Well maybe "all the time" would get creepy, imo...
But a few glimpses here and there can't hurt right? It really is more of a compliment if anything... ^^
Or you should see it as a compliment, its in our biology (male AND female) to check for attractive potential mates... XD
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MuffinStealer Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
But. It happens all the time. And I am sick and tired of it. I don't try to make myself look nice for them, I do it for myself and for my lover.

It is especially creepy when I find there are old, white-haired men looking me up and down, when I am not even half their age. Don't you think that is creepy? (When you get to that age, try not to stare at young women. :I )

I do not find men staring at my more private body parts a compliment. If anything, it makes me feel violated, like they are trying to undress me with their eyes. It is disgusting and makes me wonder what they do in their private time on the computer. Do you really want to be thought of as that?

It would be a compliment if you actually said something like 'I think you look gorgeous', or 'I like your eyes!'. Those are compliments. Staring at us like we're some sort of sexual doll is not.
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RadicalDanny Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
Or old white(or poorly coloured) haired ladies staring at young men like... XD

Though I have an excuse for just staring, I have a "social awkwardness" related to autism... :\
I'm too nervous to actually TALK to a hot girl in real life... :(
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MuffinStealer Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Old people staring at young people is creepy. :I

It's not alright if you're staring at their crotch, ass, or breasts. It just makes them think you're a pervert who will just use them for their body. But if you are staring at other parts of their body that are not that sexual, then it's kind of alright.
Also, why does it have to be a 'hot' girl? Why not any sort of girl?
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RadicalDanny Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012
Well I mean more to talk to any girl to ask them out or something... Just asking for the time or something should still be possible and I mostly stare at the face... ^^
Though I generally take a one or two overall glimpses (whole body), to see the whole package... ^^
But be honest you do that too. :P
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